FOR YEARS NOW GUCCI MANE AND YOUNG JEEZY HAVE BEEN INTO A SO CALLED RAP BEEF. THIS BEEF HOWEVER DID NOT START WITH RAP. IT BEGAN OVER THOUSANDS OF DOLLARS IN DRUG MONEY, AND JEEZY SENDING MEN TO KILL GUCCI MANE IN HIS OWN HOME. THE TWO COME FROM THE SAME AREA IN ATL, AND HAVE SIMILAR STYLES. THE QUESTION HOWEVER STILL STANDS: WHO IS THE BETTER RAPPER OUT OF THE TWO?
YOUNG JEEZY AND GUCCI MANE BOTH BRING TO THE TABLE HOT LYRICS AND STRONG PUNCHLINES. THEY BOTH HAVE SIMILAR STYLES AND SLOGANS SUCH AS JEEZY'S, LETS GET IT, AND GUCCI MANE'S, GUCCI GUCCI. THEY BOTH HAVE STREET MONEY, OR TRAP MONEY, PUT AWAY AND RAP MONEY. JEEZY HOWEVER HAS PROVEN HIS DOMINANCE IN THE RAP GAME AND STILL HAS A SMALL EDGE OVER GUCCI.
1. JEEZY HAS SOLD MILLIONS OF RECORDS AND IS MORE POPULAR OVERALL IN THE WORLD OF HIP HOP.
2.JEEZY NEWEST MIXTAPE SLAMS GUCCI MANE FOR GETTING HIS CHAIN TOOKEN IN CHICAGO BY WELL KNOWN CHICAGO RAPPERS.
3. YOUNG JEEZY GAVE GUCCI DRUGS TO MAKE MONEY OFF.
4. HE IS A MAN OF HIS WORD AND SENT PEOPLE TO TAKE WHAT HE WANTED FROM GUCCI.
GUCCI MANE HOWEVER HAS BEOME VERY POPULAR AND RIPPED TRACKS LIKE BIG CAT RECORDS. HIS MIXTAPE SO ICEY BOY HAS GROWN POPULARITY AND IS BEING BLASTED ALL OVER THE STREETS. EVEN THOUGH THESE TWO BOTH ARE PERSONEL FAVORITES YOUNG JEEZY CLEARLY HAS PROVEN HIMSELF AS THE BEST OF THE TWO
4 comments:
Tyrone, I've mentioned this in class, but I don't think you were around. Take off the CAPS LOCK. If you want to use all-caps for emphasis, that's okay. But to use it throughout is distracting, and a bad habit for academic writing. I expect you to use proper mechanics, even in our blogs.
T-You really covered the topic well and it's great how you compared the two!
O-You give great examples on why you support Jezzy instead of Gucci, also the facts were right on point!
W-You don't really use "text" talk you may have one or two words but it's not taking away from the blog
E-Your conclusion and opinions were great they matched the facts on the spot! you stated your opinion and gave reasons why you stated them.
I give you a 4 on this blog it's great!
YOU TOPIC WAS VERY WELL DEPICTED. IT CAUGHT MY ATTENTION AND IT MADE ME WANT TO READ MORE. IT WAS INTERESTING HOW U ADDED THAT PICTURES IN YOU TEXT TO EMPHASIS THERE DIFFERENT BUT ALSO SIMILAR STYLES. THE FACTS THAT YOU PRESENT WERE ALSO INTERESTING TO, FORTHOSE WHO DON'T NECESSARILY KEEP UP WITH THE RAP GAME. I WOULD GIVE YOUR BLOG POST A OVERALL 5 BUT I SAW ONE OR TWO GRAMER OR SPELLING ERRORS
T-The topic is always relevant to the blogs' concept.
O-Opinion is backed by facts.
W-All words are in caps lock and a little text talk.
E-The elements are all there and you give the artist who you think is better than.
Overall=4
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